Saturday, April 2, 2011

Don't feel my pain..

You don't feel my pain, Well,
With the wind gushing past away, the tree does
With the moon hiding away, the sky does
With the bee flying away, the flower does
With the waves rising away, the sea does
With the dew melting away, the leaf does
With the water drying away, the earth does
With the smoke smoking away, the fire does
With the conquerer leaving away, the summit does
With the bubble dying away, the water does
With the admirer going away, the beauty does.
So its okay if you don't feel my pain.

4 comments:

ghostwriter said...

Wow, this is a beautifully expressed poem..Love it!!!:)))

P.S: there should probably be no "the" with beauty :)

Priyanka said...

thanks bharath. :) Aaapse hi seekha hai.. :)

AB said...

This is probably the best one you've ever published.

Priyanka said...

Thank you.. :)